i really enjoy your final image. the piece has so much movement to it because of the different opacities and how the separate images don't all fit together perfectly. I think the way you also broke the rectangular picture plane was really creative.
Nice tweak on the colors, they stand out much more than your other images. I think I take back my first comment about clipping those edges around the pictures and the canvas, I really enjoy seeing all the corners of the images that make up the piece.
I like how your images pay attention to the very small changes from one moment to the next that are often overlooked as insignificant. It's interesting that you were able to capture motion through the composition and directional curve of the cars; also the girl as she turns to look over her shoulder and then back to keep walking.
I kind of wish you had cropped out the Photoshop frame from the screenshot (or is that intentional to the piece..?). I really like that you made your own space with the photos and that it works so well. This reminds me of King Street when the leafers are here in the fall because it's a nightmare. I love the angle as well from on top of a store/building.
I think your composition is working well. When I first focused on the image, I was drawn towards the point of the church, the red house and the heavy traffic. I think the way you combined the car images creates a sense of crowdedness and anxiety. I'd like to see if you work on this project further, and what exactly your concept is.
This looks good but to me it still looks like just one image with a bunch of different tones. There aren't enough different elements in it and the white space is distracting.
I'm really loving the curvature and use of movement in this piece. It really guides your eye from one section to the next, and is cohesive even though its busy. I appreciate your different take on this project. Although we all know the place very well and we know what we're looking at, you've really created another space that is unique in itself and separate from reality. Nice job
i really enjoy your final image. the piece has so much movement to it because of the different opacities and how the separate images don't all fit together perfectly. I think the way you also broke the rectangular picture plane was really creative.
ReplyDeleteI commented on the one below this too, thinking it was the final. I like how in this one the colors are richer
ReplyDeleteNice tweak on the colors, they stand out much more than your other images. I think I take back my first comment about clipping those edges around the pictures and the canvas, I really enjoy seeing all the corners of the images that make up the piece.
ReplyDeleteI like how your images pay attention to the very small changes from one moment to the next that are often overlooked as insignificant. It's interesting that you were able to capture motion through the composition and directional curve of the cars; also the girl as she turns to look over her shoulder and then back to keep walking.
ReplyDeleteI kind of wish you had cropped out the Photoshop frame from the screenshot (or is that intentional to the piece..?). I really like that you made your own space with the photos and that it works so well. This reminds me of King Street when the leafers are here in the fall because it's a nightmare. I love the angle as well from on top of a store/building.
ReplyDeleteI think your composition is working well. When I first focused on the image, I was drawn towards the point of the church, the red house and the heavy traffic. I think the way you combined the car images creates a sense of crowdedness and anxiety. I'd like to see if you work on this project further, and what exactly your concept is.
ReplyDeleteThis looks good but to me it still looks like just one image with a bunch of different tones. There aren't enough different elements in it and the white space is distracting.
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool. I see this view every day walking to class and I've never looked at it this way before
ReplyDeleteI'm really loving the curvature and use of movement in this piece. It really guides your eye from one section to the next, and is cohesive even though its busy. I appreciate your different take on this project. Although we all know the place very well and we know what we're looking at, you've really created another space that is unique in itself and separate from reality. Nice job
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